Death by Chocolate

Fun chocolate obsessed Senyru...

Subtleties of bliss

the relentless longing for

chocolate on tap

Reviews

[James William Dyer]

This one didn't really rock my world, but I enjoyed the last line....the title is so overused in our culture, I think I've seen four poems on this site alone with similar titles....but again, liked the last line. Senryrus seem to be trending, but they don't appeal to me much, unlike haiku's. Just my o.pinion

[Frieda P]

As you're entitled, yes, it's been overdone, you're right, but c'mon, chocolate on tap, I'd die in a vat of chocolate if I could pick a way to go.

[James William Dyer]

Lol

[Frieda P]

Well, that's my second choice anyway. ;-)

[James William Dyer]

I can think of a lot of pleasurable ways to be just before that 'way' kills you lol. If I had cancer, say, and the prognosis was terminal pain....I'd go the oxycodone route, with a weekend of xtc beforehand

[Frieda P]

Ugh I hated oxycodone, that stuff makes me weird, or weirder ;-)

[James William Dyer]

I love my little helpers:-)

[Frieda P]

ha yeah till you're an addict, go read what you inspired ;-)

[AYVID N]

So sensual... so sexy! You have a lot on mind ;)

[Frieda P]

Hahaha, after reading your latest masterpiece, it's more likely YOU that has a lot on her mind my dear Divya! ;-)
Thanks....

[AYVID N]

hmmmm ;) I do...
Thanx for calling it a masterpiece Frieda. You are so kind always.

[Frieda P]

hmmmm ha ;-)

[Coyote Poetry]

Chocolate is a good way to go. I need some good coffee to go with it. A very tasty poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Coffee & chocolate, perfect pairing. ;-)
Thanks Coyote.

[Sunil Sharma]

Sublime...economically delivered!

[That_Girl]

I like milk.... dark should be illegal it's so damn gross.....

[Frieda P]

I like dark ;-)

[KeeD]

I'm chocolate colored, just saying. Well almost, lol.
This was so good, I love hot chocolate so I can relate, I'm pretty lame that way, whenever I go out for coffee with friends or on a date, Instead of being a boss and ordering a latte or a cappuccino I'll get a hot chocolate and then think to myself, k she definitely thinks i'm a child now. xoxo kee.

[LA Lorena]

Keegan.... maybe frieda was metaphorically speaking, and it's not chocolate she wants to savour, but you? ;) I got her number, for a price, I could hook you up! ;)

[KeeD]

For a price you say? :P A lady that straight up speaks business, I like it. I'm Keegan, how you doing? Depending on how you choose to answer this question ^, i'll take you up on your offer, haha # diplomat :P

[Baby Ricochet]

Someone was eating chocolate cake. They said it was called to "better than sex" cake. I said it was actually called "you're not doing it right " cake. My name was better.

[LA Lorena]

ain't no better way to go. ok, maybe there is one way that would be better, but this runs a close second!

[C.C. Marx]

Oh my....did you say chocolate!!?! O.0

[Frieda P]

Yep, sinful isn't it? ;-)

[C.C. Marx]

You have no idea, I could eat my bodyweight in it and feel guilty later, stratch that I wouldn't feel guilty at all

[kelvin]

chocolate tends to satisfy cravings as other forms of chocolate satisfies our other cravings hahaha chocolate helps stimulate the mind in areas so I'm told of certain functions so I'm told keep writing fellow writer

[Frieda P]

haha 'so I'm told', won't commit eh? Thanks!

[kelvin]

hahaha you're welcome and I plead the fifth hahaha

[Frieda P]

;-)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

ha surely not a Mars bar lol