Déjà vu

Déjà vu

A Poem by Frieda P



We are given breath, we die
what fills those pages in between
are the complexities of life
 innuendos of an oblique allusion 

Kismet, fate, or some divine intervention
the paths we take are sometimes vague
is this all predestined or do we 
as humans, determine our fate

Has it been written in the stars long ago
on some crystal clouds or tissue paper,
should we abjure echoes of past?

Is Déjà Vu the very life we've repeated
felt beneath the soul's intrinsic liquid
like hot lava that bubbles and churns
I muse if life is preordained 

© 2013 Frieda P


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DrD
A unique and interesting theme that is rarely, if ever, touched in poetry. I found Deja vu very interesting and a great read.

A unique and interesting theme that is rarely, if ever, touched in poetry. I found Deja vu very interesting and a great read.

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Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Divya, I'm not sure what I believe in anymore. ;-)
DrD

11 Years Ago

Bat s**t crazy? You mean like going bananas? Or like going ape s**t? Oh, but that's the same thin.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I mean like all of the above!!



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Life is life my beauty. No rehearsal, no regret just learning if we may.

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Posted 11 Years Ago


Noodle likes this! ;-) this is really well written!!! Well done Frieda

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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You always make me smile :D

Thanks Noodlehead!
s y e

11 Years Ago

Awwww, that is sweet! :-)

Welcome Frieda!!!
Intriguing write. :) Nice job!!

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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

It's an intriguing question in my mind, thanks Insanity :)

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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