Wow :D all your poems put a smile on the readers face. :P I have the goofiest smile right now. Such a cute, honest, seasonal write. Tokens and souvenirs that have mementos of a happy past or a past we're glad we've gotten through, Frieda P has done it once again. Created Beauty.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Aww goofy smiles are the best! Thanks Kee, you're a doll!
This is cute! By the way, thanks for ur review on my poem. Also could u maybe read my story? I mean u don't have to, but I'd LOVE it if I did. Thanks!
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
You're too cute, how could I say no?! I've got a bunch of RR's I have to get to but I'll be sure to.. read moreYou're too cute, how could I say no?! I've got a bunch of RR's I have to get to but I'll be sure to read it, and thanks! ;-)
Ah the tree...bittersweet isn't it? How I love the lights and the sparkles, hanging the ornaments...well now, that can sometimes bring a wide range of emotions indeed. I hope your holiday was spectacular...best wishes to you too Frieda :)
I think your poem has brought me a revelation of sorts, specifically about ornaments. In same ways, I guess ornaments are time capsules with many memories attached to them.
Your lines helped me realize what I mentioned before:
"Emotions hung on a tree/memories for all to see"
I thought about the ornaments that have been in my family for 20 years or more, and then I smiled. You have brought all of us a piece of the timeless joy the Christmas season has to offer.
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..