Haiku for The kimmer

I've caught the bug....

The lovely kimmer

somewhere out there in left field

reel her in with sin

(or is that gin?)

Reviews

[Shruti Das]

:D I love haikus and it's not a style which you usually come across. I have tried writing several myself so, I got really excited when I saw that you too write hiakus. And I really liked this one. Especially, the last stanza.

[Frieda P]

Haha, thanks, it's only the second I wrote and it was really in response to something someone else had written but it turned out alright! ;-)

[Kaylor Mason]

Angel's food or Devil's food? . . . hmmm . . . one of those choices that ain't no choice at all

[Frieda P]

That's what she said. ;-P

[quinfinn]

now, is that nice? great fun!

[Frieda P]

What's nice got to do with it quin? Didn't you just write one about 'sitting on your face'? erhum....just saying.

[Pax]

oh... I'm digging in to this haiku thing... lol
intriguing...
ha!

[Frieda P]

haha It's usually not my style, I have so much more to say! ;-)
Thanks....

[KAOlmsted]

:-D WOOHOO!!!!!!! Thank you, Frieda!!!

[Frieda P]

You're quite welcome The kimmer My ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Well first off as I told Kimmer this is actually a senryu... both have a 5-7-5 syllable count but haikus are about nature or whether all others are senryus....
Still love this, that was funny. If you reel her in with sin then I must be a magnet, LOL

[Frieda P]

Technicalities! You saying The kimmer's not part of nature Dalel? ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well she is a natural pain, LOL... Kidding Kimmer

[KAOlmsted]

:-D *LAUGH*

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

hehehe... het put down the frying pan and step away :)

[KAOlmsted]

Dale...the pen is mightier than the frying pan *muah-ah-ah-ah*

:-D

[Frieda P]

hahah ain't that the fookin truth?! :-P

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Huh-oh I think I am in trouble :)

[LA Lorena]

LOL! I like this one!

[That_Girl]

4 lines... cheater! ;)

[Frieda P]

shuddap, it's in parenthesis it doesn't count ;-P