Last Word

Hanging by the noose

cryptic farewells penned

that last breath of words

never wraps up loose ends

Reviews

[James William Dyer]

Very powerful, I liked how much emotion was contained within such brevity. Must be the pain inside someone committing suicide is so great that they feel rushed to the act, and such complex emotions would probably be very hard for them to pen in many cases....but for sure, a note left behind is never an equation to describe the properties of the soul (i mean soul in the secular sense)

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your kind review James...that note only proved to make it harder to accept, it continues to stab.

[InsanityWriter]

So sad and true. :( Beautiful poem.

[Frieda P]

Thanks, I know :(

[Ahmad Cox]

It is short but very powerful. I really enjoyed this one.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for reading me.

[KAOlmsted]

It's true...suicide notes generally raise more questions than answers. Very powerful write, Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Thanks kimmer, and that's so true....

[Tree]

Good poem Frieda. This opened up a small door inside of me. A well written piece, that made me think.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Diego, that's what I was hoping for....

[quinfinn]

a picture paints a thousand words and actions speak more loudly.....this is a very clever piece

[Frieda P]

Thank you quinn, much appreciated.

[quinfinn]

i love your writes...sincerely

[DrD]

Is anything ever truly finished? I liked this very much and compliment your word selection. Excellent work. Myrna liked it, too, but she thought "noose" was a long nose and couldn't understand anyone hanging by their nose. But that's Myrna.

[Frieda P]

Only you could fecking joke about this and get away with it doc! Tell Myrna I said thanks...

[DrD]

Hey, it wasn't me, remembr?

[C.C. Marx]

Some people can display a mountain of emotions in a few short lines....great job

[Frieda P]

Thanks C.C. appreciate the read.

[C.C. Marx]

My pleasure as always

[That_Girl]

Damn... a punch to the damn face. Very nice.

[Frieda P]

Sorry, only way some stories can be told :(

[That_Girl]

No, it's really GREAT! That's talent, hun. :)

[kublakhan27]

So many strong emotions in a small package of words...less is definitely more here...great work^^

[Frieda P]

Thank you for the read.

[Sheila Kline]

You've pulled the chair right out from under this one!! We have to say it, do it, plan it, etc, etc. and move on! Loose ends are dangerous!
(And, I really like the image)

[Frieda P]

thanks so much Sheila, oddly enough so do I, felt good to get it out anyway...