Last Word

Hanging by the noose

cryptic farewells penned

that last breath of words

never wraps up loose ends

Reviews

[James William Dyer]

Very powerful, I liked how much emotion was contained within such brevity. Must be the pain inside someone committing suicide is so great that they feel rushed to the act, and such complex emotions would probably be very hard for them to pen in many cases....but for sure, a note left behind is never an equation to describe the properties of the soul (i mean soul in the secular sense)

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your kind review James...that note only proved to make it harder to accept, it continues to stab.

[Kaylor Mason]

It's pure hell, how unjust this world really is. Life's never fair . . . just a lot fairer than the alternative

[Frieda P]

Thanks for the read.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Closure is like a unicorn when it comes to losing love.

[Frieda P]

Yep, those damn unicorns again. Thanks Dale.

[Baby Ricochet]

Good one

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Baby

[sithlordjp]

a strong piece of writing. Do all words lead to loose ends...? Each word open new roads, rarely dead ends... thanks for sharing !

[Frieda P]

Thanks for reviewing.

[Kristina Moulaison]

Oooh, geez....so much heavy meaning in so few words! So well said!

[Frieda P]

Thanks Misty.

[PP]

Freida, don't know what to say! so sad and so strong, well done :)

[Frieda P]

I think you said it well, thanks so much. :)

[PP]

:)

[Tai Ryens]

Impactful and saddening; having found the farewell letter and feeling as empty as you would if farewells had been said face to face. Well done.

[Frieda P]

Funny you should say, apparently there was a face to face as my sister visited everyone that same day, we just didn't know it was her last visit. Thank you for your kindness.

[khalid]

very short but it can be expressed in books. i like this kind. really..the best speech is the shortest and direct to point..

[Frieda P]

Sometimes those are the only words that escape, thanks my friend.

[khalid]

welcome

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

:( its sad , so sad

[Frieda P]

More so than you can imagine, thanks for stopping by.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

welcome , my pleasure ..

[Ruth]

Oooohhh....impact!
Cleverly so :)
xox

[Frieda P]

thanks Poppy, good impact I hope....

[Ruth]

Very :)