Do the Croak

Tongue in cheek rant about cheaters, and how women so often say they're going to change sides because of it...it's supposed to a joke guys! ;-)

I want to dance on your heart, 

not some old fashioned love song

more like an Irish riverdance

or a good old fashioned slammin' stomp

cowboys boots were made for a kicker two step

Yeeehaaa!! now I'm gonna line dance over you

 stiletto's will let me tango on your face

crunch disgusting insects the likes of you

Lie to me again about your vile cheating heart

shuffling with my old reliable metal tap shoes

Dancing in the rain ain't  no picnic

when you're the puddle my little pretty

One last hardcore punk dance or perhaps 

a jitterbug would suit that demeanor

when you were supposed to be in our bed

you were doing the  horizontal mambo elsewhere

Now crank crank that cheating heart to death

Gonna waltz myself right to a dip in the lady pond

where no two timing cheating frogs croak on me

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

I'm not sure if this lines up with your theme, but this poem brought to mind the "singing frog" from Looney Toons ("One Froggy Evening")...an animal that hides this incredible talent, showing it off only long enough to tempt its owner with the fame that would accompany the ownership of a "singing frog" but turning into just a boring old frog when the owner attempts to showcase him for profit. I'm a guy but I definitely tip my hat to this exquisite little rant...I promise I'm not one of those "singing frogs" :)

[Frieda P]

Oh that's so funny, I just looked up the little green guy! ;)

[kublakhan27]

LOL One of the best cartoons of all-time ;D

[Frieda P]

I can't believe I've never seen that one!

[kublakhan27]

I'm a LT buff so I probably have an unfair advantage lol :)

[Frieda P]

If you would have said the Tasmanian Devil or Foghorn Leghorn, I'd have been there! ;)

[kublakhan27]

Haha Yeah they're classics for sure ;)

[Tarry Franck]

This is so clever:
stiletto's will let me tango on your face
crunch disgusting insects the likes of you
Very well said - Love everything about it. Love the sensitive brutality you brought to this.

[s y e]

This poem is so clever!!
I do love dancing...a lot!! And the thought of dancing on the cheater with stilettos...Ouch!!

[Frieda P]

haha OUCHIE indeed!
thanks noodle ;P

[s y e]

I was gonna say 'wowchaa' but thought against it LOL
Welcome!!! x-D

[jamal]

Do the croak LOL! nice name for sure :)


Great work!

[Jibey]

Hehe...crunching, blasting and dunking words

[khalid]

this poem reminds me of high school music movie in which anger can be moved into great fast cruel wild dances. i like the idea, soft revenge is really more cruel than assassination because it makes the victim feel all the pain slowly..
i have really enjoyed how you have expressed your anger in a soft nice way like this..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i too don't believe in cheating...if you want someone else...let the partner know and break up...

it is best.

this poem is so clever...i do like to dance...and the idea of dancing ON a cheater...stomping him with stilettos...ooooh...
and that hard core punk dance...a good slam is what he deserves.

jacob

[Frieda P]

have a huge grin on my face :D

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the flow and the description in the poem. Direct and honest thoughts made the poem fun to read. No weakness in the fun and entertaining poem to read.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Thanks Coyote, it was cathartic and fun to write too, much appreciate your visit.

[Claire Twinn]

You go girl! I like the up beat feeling in the face of adversity, makes me want to get my dancing shoes out....

[Frieda P]

Thanks Claire, I'm still stuck on your story and him creeping up those stairs ;-)