Tabasco Sauce of Life

Tabasco Sauce of Life

A Poem by Frieda P

The Tabasco sauce of life is the best spice

all jacked up on hot and heavy, spicy flavor

life's longing for the temptress of thrill

passionate lovemaking, plunging into the deep

first time glow that makes the heart flutter

taking that leap of faith off mount ecstasy

leaves those burning sensations to tickle

lingering after the fluster of prime impact fades 

holiday, lovers, love, valentines, sweet, honey, abstract, heart, february, darling, wallpaper, wallpapers

© 2012 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P
Inspired after a conversation with someone on WC...ha, not that way!

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DrD
When a woman compares her emotional dimensions to Tabasco sauce, something's definitely amiss. My emotions range more into the tartar sauce range and sometimes accelerating to apple sauce. But it was fun reading even though I am far too innocent to understand it all.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

:) that was supposed to be 'NOT' but I take it you got it! .....
KeeD

11 Years Ago

It's safe to assume Tom Jones now has my underwear as well. I really did feel like a sex bomb every .. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

How did I miss this, Tom Jones, seriously, old swivel hips?



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Hot sauce yes life can filled with thrills and spills the excitement of being with love one intimately and among other things in life but to some the excitement tends to start turning less intense and start to fade. or you could just be talking about hot sauce hahaha good read here very creative I hear creative people tend to do creative things lol.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

BHAHAHAAHA...you cheeky thing you....
kelvin

11 Years Ago

Hahahaha i hear ya
Well i never though of the essence of life in terms of hot sauce, but it did make me think. There is this spicy essence of things out there and here we are in the middle of life, and we are in charge of choosing our flavors. This seems like quite a good one to choose. You know, very exiting and lively and all.


Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is playful, yet intense! I don't think I'll ever look at hot sauce the same way again! This piece will leave a lasting impression...
I like how you created such an unusual yet perfect allegory for one of the stronger emotions in life.
It boarders on being too sensual for me, but somehow the tie in to the literal hotness of the tabasco keeps it grounded just enough. I can still feel the sizzle...

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I have no idea what you're talking about, it's about 'hot sauce' ;-)
Emily

11 Years Ago

Oh, my mistake... ;)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

No problem ;P

thanks...
There's nothing like plunging into the deep and those spicy flavors. Nice poem and vist to mount ecstacy. Yum.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Relic

11 Years Ago

I do that sometimes. :D
LA Lorena

11 Years Ago

he does it often! ;)
Relic

11 Years Ago

No I don't. haha
A dash of tabasco sauce, a few sprinkles of chilli powder, a shake of cayenne pepper all added to a plate of desire, and the result is a flaming portion of "Oooh la la", followed by a desert of YOWZA,....all on a menu of "Sensual Delights"....oh, I like this!
I would say you took the thought and burned the kitchen down with it!!!...lol
I invite you to check out two of my stories about cooking up some fun....

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/wvhillbilly47/463755/
An Extra Measure of Love - Part I

and

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/wvhillbilly47/465277/
An Extra Measure of Love II....(Special Ingredients Added)

Keep up the "HOT" writing!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You gotta tone down your reviews Shelia, you're upstaging my poetry! lol :-P
Sheila Kline

11 Years Ago

Dang, and I just thought I was being creative, and a naughty gal all in one....lol
Okay, I am .. read more
Intense and hot in more ways than one...I can feel the crackles running through this^^

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You felt them too eh? ;)
thanks...
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

I did ;) No problem^^
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DrD
When a woman compares her emotional dimensions to Tabasco sauce, something's definitely amiss. My emotions range more into the tartar sauce range and sometimes accelerating to apple sauce. But it was fun reading even though I am far too innocent to understand it all.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

:) that was supposed to be 'NOT' but I take it you got it! .....
KeeD

11 Years Ago

It's safe to assume Tom Jones now has my underwear as well. I really did feel like a sex bomb every .. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

How did I miss this, Tom Jones, seriously, old swivel hips?
gosh, i wonder who that might be....you did it! so, old bay seasoning wasn't enough spice for you huh? seriously though, this is a very clever and well worded write. well done (no pun intended)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

haha I had fun with it, glad you approve ;-)
You have to watch what you say with me...ha
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

hmm, this could prove interesting

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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