Fookin' Unicorns

Over the moon where unicorns play charades

is where your love sent me on flight

that journey of places in time and space

no one touched the stars and moon as you did

my soul was touched by an epic d'angel 

my heart turned a special hue of passion

then you cut me and the story ended when i bled

a different dark shaded color of fancy betrayal 

the memory still lives on, and the lesson learned...

when you hang out with bloody unicorns you get fucked

                                                            

Reviews

[KeeD]

I always knew they were "b******s" but never admitted it to myself. Thank you for showing me the light Frieda.
"my heart turned a special hue of passion
a different dark shaded color of fancy betrayal" The contrast of these two lines fits in so beautifully in this poem. Ingenious writing and the end had such an awesome message, Mess with the bull you get the horns, in this case a f*****g unicorn. haha. "Excuse my language":P.

[Frieda P]

Thanks, that was one of my more fun vents! ;-)
...and I said it first, so it's all good hah

[Justaguy]

This was so funny. It sure turned a different direction on me. Nicely done!

[Frieda P]

Ha like to keep you guys on your toes! Thanks muchly....

[Dr. Wood ?]

and YOU call ME CRAZY?????????????

Weird and wonderful Freida

[Frieda P]

Yes and I still stand behind that statement doc....! ;-)

[Dr. Wood ?]

And I agree wholeheartedly....I might even have been inspired...I've never done a Unicorn poem....I might try to redress the balance...Mind you it will most likely be a heavy smoker and live on a diet of burgers and chilli dogs

[Frieda P]

Lol, go for it Dave...let me know if you need antacids in the meantime.....

[Dye]

Ha..ha..ha.. OMG-- I didn't expect this when I clicked on it. I will never think of unicorns the same. Never should of got that damn tattoo......

[Frieda P]

OH NO....say it isn't so....haha, I had to resurrect this one after reading David's lovely fairy tale, if you haven't red it, perhaps you should, maybe you'll feel better about your tat again.

[Dye]

Sadly it's true... I did a lot of stupid things when was 16...live and learn LOL I will check his out.

[Frieda P]

Who hasn't, it's when you continue into your blahblablah years, that's a problem, I should know LOL

[Justaguy]

Say it aint so?!? You did something stupid at 16?...No one does that!...LMAO

[Dye]

LOL... Ha ha ha...jerk! I wish I could say my stupid ways ended in my blahblah years.

[Justaguy]

jerk????...Dye called me a jerk???...LOL. I think we all can still have the capacity for stupid once in a while...lol

[Frieda P]

You should change your pen name to 'justajerkyguy' hahaha

[Dye]

hahaha ROFLMAO!

[Justaguy]

LMAO!!!!! Hmmm. I wonder....

[Frieda P]

'Justaunicorn' has a ring to it, dontcha think?

[Justaguy]

Oooooooo...I like it. But it is kinda girly dontcha think?...lol

[s y e]

Well thanks a lot Frieda here was me thinking unicorns were awesome and so cool but now it turns out they suck ALOT -.-
Awl, well. Damn fairy-tales! :P
Loved it! Again, your an amazing poet.

[Frieda P]

Ah thanks muchly, glad to be able to educate the public on the true character of these critters! lol

[s y e]

No problemo. Yes, I bet you are :P Ha-ha.

[Ruth]

I so dig this lol
Unicorns...not to be trusted, little scamps xox

[Frieda P]

Never to be trusted again! ha thanks...x

[Baby Ricochet]

I'm gonna paint a cone for ice creamy gold, glue it to my cat's head and tell chicks the cat is a unicorn when they're over here.

[Frieda P]

hahaha stop, you're gonna make me pee my pants ;)

[Deron Alexis]

damn always thought the unicorns were epic turns out they suck

[Frieda P]

OMG that really made me LOL!! :D

[kimmy]

Oh wow :) This was truly amazing writing, the heart is well the heart I guess.. I don't know what true love is, but you have done a great job explaining all the effects love, very well written :)

[Frieda P]

thanks, I kind of figured I wouldn't be the only one that could relate ;-)

[kimmy]

I relate to this lol :)

[Frieda P]

lol that's too fookin unicorn bad! ;-)

[kimmy]

lol, that fookin unicorn right ;P

[kimmy]

that is,

[Frieda P]

Sorry, don't blame me, it's those freakin unicorns...

[kimmy]

lol, glad I met you :) You are so cool and make me smile..I like when people can have fun and be yourself :)

[Frieda P]

hahaha, my kids would really laugh at 'cool', that think i'm a dweeb...my pleasure kimmy :)

[kimmy]

lol, I think my kids would to..my oldest tells me that I am not with the times like them:)

[quinfinn]

unicorns, faeries, trolls and goblins....we are all of these, depending on the circumstances....it seems you have been to the other side of midnight and danced upon rainbows, only to discover that it was all just a beautiful dream. i applaud your whimsical rendering of a love won, cherished and then betrayed. outstanding!