Fookin' Unicorns

Over the moon where unicorns play charades

is where your love sent me on flight

that journey of places in time and space

no one touched the stars and moon as you did

my soul was touched by an epic d'angel 

my heart turned a special hue of passion

then you cut me and the story ended when i bled

a different dark shaded color of fancy betrayal 

the memory still lives on, and the lesson learned...

when you hang out with bloody unicorns you get fucked

                                                            

Reviews

[KeeD]

I always knew they were "b******s" but never admitted it to myself. Thank you for showing me the light Frieda.
"my heart turned a special hue of passion
a different dark shaded color of fancy betrayal" The contrast of these two lines fits in so beautifully in this poem. Ingenious writing and the end had such an awesome message, Mess with the bull you get the horns, in this case a f*****g unicorn. haha. "Excuse my language":P.

[Frieda P]

Thanks, that was one of my more fun vents! ;-)
...and I said it first, so it's all good hah

[Woody]

oh my, this is brilliant and witty.
I'll never hang out with unicorns again. nasty critters as you said.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Woody, true story. :)

[Giggling Star]

I can just see you and Metro charging at each other on your respective unicorns as in the days of old. Jousting with each other to see who can fook who first!!! You two should have your own show :P LOL

[Frieda P]

Ha and who do you think wins this joust? hahah

[Giggling Star]

It depends on who's holding the peanut butter ... and you'd better remember ... he is court ordered to only do circles ... LOL

[Frieda P]

Ha true that, I nearly had forgotten that part.....lol

[Giggling Star]

Watch your behind there Frieda ... I know the Wolf will be! HA

[Frieda P]

I knew I should have worn pants today...ha

[Giggling Star]

Sorry, unless his horn goes limp ... I don't think pants will protect you ...

[Frieda P]

Ermahgerd, you're so bad....

[Tina Louise UK]

So that's what that horn is for, always wondered...enjoyed this little vent :) x

[Frieda P]

Ha yep, creepy critters. ;-) x

[Scott Metro]

Wonderful..Unicorns..they're all alike...b******s.
LOL
A great bit of wit here....
Right on.
Scott...

[Frieda P]

Ha ha fook the buggers. Thanks ;-)

[Scott Metro]

LOL..yes..!!!!

[Frieda P]

Include that in your new one...haha

[Scott Metro]

Oh...I'm thinking about this you know

[Frieda P]

Should go well with the peanut butter....

[Scott Metro]

I'm not telling where I'm gonna put the peanut butter...LOL..use your imagination...

[Frieda P]

Oh brother.............ha

[Scott Metro]

LOL.......

[Frieda P]

Have another cuppa I can't wait for this one....

[Scott Metro]

You'll get an RR...promise

[Raymond Federle]

Fookmee, that was pretty good! Seems like you an I have unicorns on the brain this week...weird...cool...but weird. :)

[Frieda P]

Ha it's an oldie but you reminded me of it with your deep fried unicorn breakfast! ;-)

[redflutterby]

Now thats gotta hurt!!! Owwwieeeee...ha!

Always picking on those unicorns...geez!! Lol... ;-pppx

[Frieda P]

Haha, I was just reminded of this one when Raymond says he eats crispy fried unicorns for breakfast, sounds like a plan to me. hahaha ;-)

[redflutterby]

Lol... hmmm....dont know if that would taste good. And the fairies and elves are going to be really pissed about that crap!! Unicorns are endangered species you know!!

[Frieda P]

Ha when they hang out around me they are LOL ;-)

[redflutterby]

Lol...yeah I can tell!! ;-D

[Brittany Zedalis]

I found it! Haha. That last line definitely got a laugh out of me. Another brilliant piece from you. I'm glad to have found it. xD

[Frieda P]

Haha those nasty critters again, thanks ;-D

[Lyn Anderson]

The end is perfect! I love it! double entendres abound and the unicorns are everywhere. You made my day.

[Frieda P]

HA I figured you would......!

[FlatLineBeauty]

lol! I loved this. Very good work and really creative :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

OUCH!!!...Damn Unicorns! LMAO!!

Thank gawd my Unicorn is gentle. ;D

I love this Sassy write, Friedalicious... you tell 'em!~xoxo~ ;)