I AM

Do you know me?

My idiotic existence can be chaotic

I am bigger than life and death combined

I may be your enemy, I can be your friend

I will never share a tasty morsel with you

I will impose myself, but never surrender

I'm a trash talking, goal hungry son of a b***h

I eat power, prestige and the big bucks for breakfast

You know me, you want me, you dream of me

You can't see me, I'm a hallucination

Reviews

[luviva]

wow..great one!!
absolutely loved it. at first i was like okey, i gues we are in for another spice of political poetry..
but by the end i was like ohh maybe not!!
then am like hoo... this might be about the money lovers.. but still it can apply to the food lovers.. its an all rounder.
brilliant idea... loved it!!

[Frieda P]

Thanks, see what i meant? That's what makes the world go round ;)

[luviva]

lolzzzz

[Sami Khalil]

Now you got me here . Are you revealing your true self or someone else. Forgive me to ask you, if we have a friend why do you consider it a war of winning or surrender unless it is an enemy. It is a free country and we can all agree to disagree . The second statement sounds like you are a God or Goddess in my understanding. I would like to know in my limited understanding your views on that . Thank you so much . Please forgive my curiosity...

[Frieda P]

A goddess, in my dreams! It could be or you, or anyone here....it's not something that's tangible...it's a free country that's why it's possible and is probably responsible for wars, etc....

[Sami Khalil]

K. So I can be a God in my dreams or you a Goddess in your dream. Can I be a God in your dream ... LOl just kidding . Forgive me... I totally understand you and I think you do the same with me. Thank you for the explanation ...

[Sami Khalil]

Have a good night.

[LA Lorena]

Riddles? crap. you've been hanging out round me too much of late. I'm starting to rub off on ya.

[Frieda P]

haha yeah bad news I was already fooked up in the head! :P
you just gonna sit there and look perty?

[LA Lorena]

LOL. I'm just in from work, and anything but perky. ok, maybe my breasts are, but the rest of me is rat shite.:)

[LA Lorena]

LMAO! worse than I thought. I thought you said perky! LOLOL. goodnight, I'm obviously done for!

[Frieda P]

ROFLMAO nite :)

[David Scott]

Ouch! You pinned me down with you pen. Ha.
I always thought I was to good to be true! ;)
Great little satire.

[Frieda P]

You sly fox YOU. ;-)

[David Scott]

;-)

[ms. barrie]

oh this is insanely brilliant! sorry, this has rendered me without any thoughts on what else i can say. damn. 100 to the 100th degree, and cupcakes too!

[Frieda P]

LOL not even a guess? ;)

[Frieda P]

Thanks for the cupcakes, are they the shoe ones? :P

[ms. barrie]

okay, yes, the last line..."You can't see me, I'm a hallucination" -- exquisitely written with such profoundness..yes, all that this poem described, though biting is actually the truth, we all wish to wear a mask and hide our true feelings, when it comes to letting others (or even admitting to ourselves) that we care or that other person hurt us. we long for them to keep thinking that no, they don;t know us, so how can they really hurt us, yet we get close, friend-wise, lover, and we tend to let them in...the last line again brilliantly validates this whole poem, the concept. excellent job! sorry if this didn't make any sense or i was wrong (told you i was rendered w/o any reasonable thought)...and no shoes, socks. chocolate cupcakes with sprinkles, just for you :))

[Frieda P]

lmfao you're babbling hahah :)))

[ms. barrie]

yeah, i'm a doofus, you caught me c:

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Now I got the old who song in my head "Can you see the real me? Can ya? Can ya?" Truly knowing some takes time and even then you never truly know everything. Makes life interesting.

If I were to guess I would say you are the federal Government.

[Frieda P]

Hahaha, noooooooooo, but good one! :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Darn... guess I am no Sherlock Holmes, LOL

[jacob erin-cilberto]

giving this some thought...ah, the riddle!

[Frieda P]

;-)