I AM

I AM

A Poem by Frieda P
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Do you know me?

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My idiotic existence can be chaotic
I am bigger than life and death combined
I may be your enemy, I can be your friend
I will never share a tasty morsel with you
I will impose myself, but never surrender
I'm a trash talking, goal hungry son of a b***h
I eat power, prestige and the big bucks for breakfast
You know me, you want me, you dream of me
You can't see me, I'm a hallucination

© 2012 Frieda P


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wow..great one!!
absolutely loved it. at first i was like okey, i gues we are in for another spice of political poetry..
but by the end i was like ohh maybe not!!
then am like hoo... this might be about the money lovers.. but still it can apply to the food lovers.. its an all rounder.
brilliant idea... loved it!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

12 Years Ago

Thanks, see what i meant? That's what makes the world go round ;)
luviva

12 Years Ago

lolzzzz



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wow..great one!!
absolutely loved it. at first i was like okey, i gues we are in for another spice of political poetry..
but by the end i was like ohh maybe not!!
then am like hoo... this might be about the money lovers.. but still it can apply to the food lovers.. its an all rounder.
brilliant idea... loved it!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

12 Years Ago

Thanks, see what i meant? That's what makes the world go round ;)
luviva

12 Years Ago

lolzzzz
Haha whaaaat?! You had me up until the last line... had to re read the entire thing! lol

But I get it now. Clever. ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


That_Girl

12 Years Ago

I reviewed this lol

Jeeeeeez I'm slow
Frieda P

12 Years Ago

no s**t sherlock lol ;)
That_Girl

12 Years Ago

Ey! That's my line. ;)
One thing going through my head is the word ambition...
ambitions can be too much and ever changing...
both affect you positively and negatively...
it makes you greedy and determined...
you will want to get what you want with all means necessary...
power, prestige, and money are means to that high unattainable goal because once you reach the top...
your goal changes and you want to climb higher and higher...
Am I even close? ^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

12 Years Ago

yeppers you're real close but NO CIGAR! ;-)
fiery-san

12 Years Ago

hmmm... is it some famous person?
I love this piece. You did a great job!!!! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Frieda P

12 Years Ago

Thanks, I guess everyone has given up!
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Sid
You got me thinking with this, is this you on the inside or something or is it just all of us on the inside you know what we actually think but don't show. Ahh, this is just so good and seriously who is this about or rather what's your take on this? you got me curious...great write btw!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

12 Years Ago

I thought this one would be easy, but I guess cause I know the answer! I read a scathing article and.. read more
Have to think about this .....very good though - will be thinking of it all day

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KarinaT

12 Years Ago

to Santa and he can deliver them :-)
Frieda P

12 Years Ago

Ho Ho Ho, not you, lol ;-)
Frieda P

12 Years Ago

Will do....xo
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Pax
haha... this makes me smile and think... riddles here and there, were will it be... ;)
I'm guessing the gorvernment well but its wrong... hmmm... thinking of another... an imagination of power... or money.... or just you perhaps... oh no... darn... i can't think of an answer...oh well better luck next time... lol.. great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

12 Years Ago

why does everyone keep saying 'me' hahha, your close with the answer....warm at least :)
and t.. read more
haha, now I know why LA Lorena loves these riddles so much....;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


DAMN!!!!!!! This is epic!!!!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think we have been aspects of this at one point or another.... it's an acute reflection of that urge inside that wants to blow out... entertaining to read!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

12 Years Ago

why thank you, no guess?

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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