Shoegasm

Shoegasm

A Poem by Frieda P
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what else? just for fun...but yes I'm serious about shoes!

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butterflies for your tootsies
lovely trinkets for the imagination
my heart's desire without an attitude
lusty little morsels to whet your appetite
red fook me shoes are nice
you tripped over my lace
i stepped on your face
nothing flat i scaled the tempo
excitement like cotton candy
round and round and up and down
fly me to the moon in my stilettos
girl's best friend is still her rockin' high hell heels
take the whole package or leave me in my wardrobe
boot strap leather lashes damask across your back  
i'll strip naked but don't disturb my shoes
you'll get a vampy stride up side your head
spike stuck in the chest until you're laid to rest
lovers come and go but these were a bloody steal
you can't hold a candle to my Manolo Blahniks'

© 2012 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P
don't get your knickers in a twist...it's just for fun! ;)

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yes, comical yet, with a sprinkle of seriousness.

take me as i am, take the whole package, crazy shoes and all...and i will be with you...and make your life as fun as a new pair of shoes.

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

:) = YES? !
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Manolo Blahniks' sounds like a Russian mafia boss and I guess I wouldn't want to be in your shoes if you messed with him. A very nice little silly piece!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Poor Jacob that was a sweaty insole!
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You of all people, have a problem with sweat? You make us sweat with your provocative storytelling.... read more
John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

No, sweat for a purpose is divine! He may be resting right now but will they leave him alone?
This is alike a kaleidoscope of whirring images, with the high heel at the centre... Lively and fun write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Well, aren't high heels the center of the universe? ;-)
Women in stilettos and long nails can stomp and claw me dead with a smile on my face.
A excelent write. Thank you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

lmao, thanks!
I think I stepped into the wrong place. I don't have a great relationship or passion for my shoes. It is a fun and a sensual, sexy write. I'll stick with my rainbows, I think. Comfort without the threat of poking holes.
Great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Hahahahah, that made me laugh, sorry Michael, and thanks. I'm not always so nutty, hmmmm
Michael G.

11 Years Ago

There is nothing wrong with nutty.
Michael G.

11 Years Ago

Most of my friends are. All say that I am.
I absolutely adore shoes......especially stillettos, awesome write.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks, I adore shoes, can you tell? :)
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

oh yes :)
LOL! I do declare, you give good shoe woman!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

hahah why thank you, that means more than you know!!
that's as best as I can remember it, I'm .. read more

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Added on December 8, 2012
Last Updated on December 11, 2012
Tags: shoes, tongue in cheek, fun

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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