Lol you call this poem? XD you need some motivation xD
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Hello mr hypocrite.... tell me again, what did you say you learned from that "Haters" poem you wrot.. read moreHello mr hypocrite.... tell me again, what did you say you learned from that "Haters" poem you wrote? I would argue you learned nothing, call you a hypocrite and say.... it's not my fault you suck where you hope to be great. Not everyone's a writer... sometimes people aren't good at their hobby. A thin skin certainly exacerbates that problem. Are you certain you want to play this game with me?
8 Years Ago
Hello mr critic ..you have no rights to criticize if u cant take criticism yourself.. If i am on the.. read moreHello mr critic ..you have no rights to criticize if u cant take criticism yourself.. If i am on the wrong side wud u please tell me the meaning of this poem?
8 Years Ago
Told ya.... too sensitive.
There is no 'right' or 'wrong' here, you've chosen to go a.. read moreTold ya.... too sensitive.
There is no 'right' or 'wrong' here, you've chosen to go a different route. EIther you can dish it out AND take it or you can't and revert back to the obvious tropes of adolescent butt hurt. This poem was much different in the past, it was long and specific to an individual. I deleted the body and left "you're welcome" to appease that person's wish not to be a subject of a poem. In your ignorance, you have chosen the wrong piece to focus on. I don't blame you... you have only been ignorant up to this point, I am not at all surprised at your petulance in this moment.
8 Years Ago
I took the first thing that attracted my attention.. I didn read ur other poems.. Ignorance? Yea i g.. read moreI took the first thing that attracted my attention.. I didn read ur other poems.. Ignorance? Yea i guess we know who we are talkin about
8 Years Ago
Weak... so weak. Wanna try again? I read a bunch of your stuff... maybe try with something that ha.. read moreWeak... so weak. Wanna try again? I read a bunch of your stuff... maybe try with something that has more words. I know reading can be tough but, give a shot anyway jr.
8 Years Ago
Yea.. Ofcourse.. I do have to read.. Bt this poem.. Was a total failure.. If u removed the body u sh.. read moreYea.. Ofcourse.. I do have to read.. Bt this poem.. Was a total failure.. If u removed the body u shud have removed the poem.. And u blame my ignorance.. Cool!!
8 Years Ago
Did you not read what I wrote? I leave this up like people leave gravestones up for their loved one.. read moreDid you not read what I wrote? I leave this up like people leave gravestones up for their loved ones. Don't be so simple and small minded.
If you turn into more of an a*****e than me... tsk tsk tsk.... you will have lost.
8 Years Ago
Narrow minded? I remember you asking me, the meaning of corpse and boutique.. If you werent a narrow.. read moreNarrow minded? I remember you asking me, the meaning of corpse and boutique.. If you werent a narrow minded person you would have understood..XD so u do accept that ur one! ;) you have always been one. For the first time you said somethin that made sense.
8 Years Ago
That's a false equivalency. I explained to you what this meant and you are either to stupid to unde.. read moreThat's a false equivalency. I explained to you what this meant and you are either to stupid to understand or just plain desperate to make it seem like your winning an argument. Either way, how pathetic of you. And didn't you say you dislike "haters" and "trolls"? And now look at you.... doing the same s**t. Ha... what a t**d you turned out to be. You're like me in disposition but more like a spider monkey in intelligence and focus. This is a quote from your page "if you're not good enough stop trying to prove it".... take your own advice jr., you look real petty and ignorant right now. And why do you talk all that s**t only to block me? What a coward.