The note

A story about 2 people

Every morning I walk past the classroom

And everyday I check the note.

Every morning the note is different

And everyday it’s magnificent

Everyday I answer the question

And everyday I wait for answer

Everyday I linger by the note

And everyday I suspect a poet

Every week I enjoy the chat

And every week I longer on the chair sat

Every week I get to know the someone

And every week I laugh some more

Every month I tell him about me

And every month I ask to meet him

Every year I tell him some more

And every year I wait for him

Every year I start to doubt

And every year I give up

Author's Note

Criticism would be greatly appreciated

Reviews

[Cosmic_Blue_Poet]

Hi, I really liked how this poem was written, it has a sensible structure and it's interesting.
For some reason I didn't "feel" anything from it, I'm sorry