the life an the opaque

The light in the soul and the death of innocence

That man should dine on the bread and wine of hurt.
Yet when is there a time that peace may divert.
One soul is alive the flesh she be dead.
As rains of incantations upon an innocents head.
Yet the evil never mocks stands against the valiant fold.
Yet to good even in the face of gossip epiphany.
Man in his good shall rise to be free
Thus the soul is of life and the flesh opaque.
When will those asleep, awake?

Author's Note

What dose this mean to you. Grammer ignore it.

Reviews

[nazia]

Firstly i like your pen name:)
This is a bit ambiguous. I guess you want to convey that when all is done, it is the goodness that will remain and all the bad deeds or the doers won't survive. Forgive me if the interpretation is wrong.
The vocabulary is good and so is the message. Rest all comes with time I am no genius myself.
Keep writing :)