Transplant

Transplant

A Poem by Sylvia

A brain made from the resources available
Mud, rot, s**t blended together
Molded with careful, angry hands
So well it almost worked

Then surgery with a teaspoon
Methodical resection
Replaced with potpourri
To kill the lingering scent

But after the years-long procedure
The sweet brain stopped to think
Perhaps that earthy silt
Could have grown flowers

© 2019 Sylvia


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yes, we wonder what exactly is in there at times. Seems that we vary between thinking nothing and everything all at once.
and maybe the speaker thinks like Sylvia Plath....with such negativity...when there could have been flowers, she just ignored the blooms.
j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I liked this, indeed.. I kinda liked it a lot.... Neville

Posted 5 Years Ago


yes, we wonder what exactly is in there at times. Seems that we vary between thinking nothing and everything all at once.
and maybe the speaker thinks like Sylvia Plath....with such negativity...when there could have been flowers, she just ignored the blooms.
j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A perfect ending to the poem. We do add and add to our brain. Hard to say, if we are wiser. Thank you Sylvia for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A little sad there at the end, well written and so well expressed

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 12, 2019
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Tags: bipolar, mental illness, free verse

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