Almost
A Poem by
Freeman
Your words ring true
throughout my soul,
Clumsy , foolish
when left alone.
Hearts to nourish
care to feed,
neglected of passion
will start to bleed.
Stem the flow
Compress with love.
Almost perfect
too perfect
to touch.
© 2010 Freeman
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Great
Posted 14 Years Ago
Wow...
Great Write!
I love the story you are talking about, and I love this!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Wow...
Great Write!
I love the story you are talking about, and I love this!
This is so well delieverd, Thoughts from the heart flow so well. Wonderful write.
Posted 14 Years Ago
This is so well delieverd, Thoughts from the heart flow so well. Wonderful write.
I like the structure of this poem, the repetition and the lines dwindling at the end.
Posted 14 Years Ago
I like the structure of this poem, the repetition and the lines dwindling at the end.
nice
Posted 14 Years Ago
nice
There are such richly painted thoughts flowing here, as you confess a loving dependence on another.. one who speaks deeply to your heart. And your last line is a brilliant expression of that overwhelming sense of being.
Posted 14 Years Ago
There are such richly painted thoughts flowing here, as you confess a loving dependence on another.. one who speaks deeply to your heart. And your last line is a brilliant expression of that overwhelming sense of being.
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Added on October 18, 2010
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Freeman United Kingdom
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Hi I am new to writing poetry, Although I have been writing songs and it would seem that they go hand in hand. I have set myself a task to write something new everyday whether it good or bad,So take ..
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