Keeper of the secret

How my mind works

The mirror returns an image 

But not one I believe,

Aesthetic has no value

as far as I can see,

deep and shallow thoughts

Sweeping through your mind

Dig a little deeper

you never will define,

I see as you do

we will never know, 

The owner is the keeper

this keeper never shows.

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I see a stranger in my mirror. Sometime I feel like I'm in the wrong place.. Few of us can see inside our mind and soul. I feel I got too many demons hidden and they need to stay buried. I like this poem. You made me think. We allow few inside our mind and life. I like the last lines. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Intern'l Shultzfeather]

Freeman, I was following the poem and reacting to it as I read. When I said you had some s**t going on, I refer to your ability. The rest of the comment was too much personal whiplash that I feel now relates to too few. You help me to understand some limits and the nature of the poetic animal of which I'm included.
Sensitivity is huge. The emotion from me comes from my wishes for you in a tired review that I will not revisit the rest of my life. I did not wish to infuriate. Just mezmerized with my own wee sense of goodness while I type another nut comment during compromised times. I'll name my goodness Fido. "Get down Fido. You're jumping up on my shoelace and bothering the hell out of me."

[Freeman]

Please dont review my life and think you understand me, you will never do that Mr Shultzfeather. This isnt constructive ,not sure what it is , maybe too deep for me.But glad it evokes some emotion in you.

Many thanks

[Intern'l Shultzfeather]

Not bellieving self comes from your first two lines, art shallow which you suggest in the poem, move over Beethoven since it reminded me of Bach. You took care like Bach stepping through your Poem. Listen to what part of you is speaking right now. I hoped you would relate to that part of your mind that knows how you relate which I feel would be helpful. That is where you show. you got some s**t going on (like nice style)and you're not listening to you. I did not like the perspective that suggests we share this perspective. LIsten and identify. (too much, I learn, but not meant to be a personal attack. Like keep identifying with yourself. Bull in a China shop relates-referring to me now) The emotion comes from my wishes for you, which came misguided. Have I back-pedalled enough. I'm becoming more aware of my tap dancing ability which I had no clue about before.

I always like mirror references. The whole inner/outer reflection thing.

[chillz]

great write^^ i enjoyed reading ~chillz~