Closing doors

Closing doors

A Poem by Freeman

Living and dying 
are equally hard
Always- just trying
to deal with the card.
 
Bad, good 
Real,love
time oh time 
never enough.

When does it end
the struggle of life
Is there ever a time
will I feel "This is right"

For now carry on
as  we before
try to keep open 
the ever closing door

© 2010 Freeman


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Peace and calm come often in our life. We just wish to make them last longer. In my life I found many places where I found friendship and peace. But we must work, make money and fall into wrong places to know what we need and want. If we look at our life. There is a lot of good also. Life is a struggle. Everyone need a day to do what they desire. A long walk. A long talk with a friend. Or just watching the sun rise and fall into the sea. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


Clever and lovely. A 'make-you-think' poem. 100/100

Posted 14 Years Ago


Right now in my life this poem could be my personalanthem. Nicely written my friend

Posted 14 Years Ago


Enjoyed reading your work this early morn..Thanks for choosing me as a friend..Sunflower

Posted 14 Years Ago


The last four lines in particular..loved them..

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is such a profound write.. you made me examine my own life just a bit more.. what is important.. and why.. For me the second passage struck me: "Time oh time .. never enough." It's so true..

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on October 16, 2010
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Freeman
Freeman

United Kingdom



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