Forever already

Forever already

A Poem by Freeman

When I saw you I knew
No sounds could be heard
Blissful silence
Drenched every word
Something connected 
Do you still need more
Dont question my love 
As many times before
I love you forever already
And more.
 
 

© 2010 Freeman


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I love the depth and emotion you do put into it. It makes me wonder who you could possibly be talking about.

Posted 14 Years Ago


lovely, deep and strong.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like the silence. I get annoyed with, "Do you still need more." Don'ts kills it for me. forever/already becomes passive aggressive. I'm happy you're a Freeman.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Hi Freeman!
Nice descriptive write! Loved the title... just wondering if a little punctuation would accentuate certain parts. What do you think?
Well done
PP

Posted 14 Years Ago


absolutely beautiful! and moving! I love!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on October 14, 2010
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Freeman
Freeman

United Kingdom



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