I know that feeling. Lately, I've had it often.
But, then......IT DID. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!
;)
This is good stuff. Good poetry. The reader immediatley wants to know what's going on....and in not telling us, you leave us with that longing. :)
And that longing will keep us coming back!
i know the feeling. total despair. it's never anything that we can't handle or get over even when we feel that way. sometimes it feels like we're stuck in looping footage and can't get the hell out. great poem. very succinct.
I know that feeling. Lately, I've had it often.
But, then......IT DID. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!
;)
This is good stuff. Good poetry. The reader immediatley wants to know what's going on....and in not telling us, you leave us with that longing. :)
And that longing will keep us coming back!
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