play time

play time

A Poem by freelancejouster

 

 

 

 

 

 

technicolor pegs peep through,

stuck into a weathered wooden plank,

meant to be hit repeatedly, incessantly

 

a dozen, or a hundred, characters

poured onto the floor

to be neglected until someone tries

to gather them back up

 

and sticky toddler hands

carry a tattered green army man

on a plastic gazelle into battle.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2012 freelancejouster


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

LOL.
Sounds like stuff I still do at the ripe old age of 38 on some Sturday nights! lol! I suppose I am the eternal child.

I especially love that last line. It really shows how wonderfully ignorant of war a child can be; and how wonderfully ignorant of war we could all be, if we'd just stop being so damned grown up. :)
t

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

Prepping to be chief someday.We keep playing as we grow older.The game is just more dangerous.Less rewarding.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LOL.
Sounds like stuff I still do at the ripe old age of 38 on some Sturday nights! lol! I suppose I am the eternal child.

I especially love that last line. It really shows how wonderfully ignorant of war a child can be; and how wonderfully ignorant of war we could all be, if we'd just stop being so damned grown up. :)
t

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very reiterative of the childhood experience.

Posted 12 Years Ago


great images, simple yet stunning.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

345 Views
5 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on February 26, 2012
Last Updated on April 14, 2012
Tags: toddler, toys, playing, colorful

Author

freelancejouster
freelancejouster

WI



About
i'm a muppet with his secrets revealed. i'm a lost teenager. i'm a rugged adventurer. I'm a bumbling novice. i'm an awkward intellectual. i'm a tear-stained lover. i'm a starving artist. i'm an.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Wings Wings

A Poem by Robin