pointless addiction

pointless addiction

A Poem by freelancejouster

i have this aching feeling
that i'll spend a great portion of my adult life,
curled in an uncomfortable chair
in front of a computer screen
scrolling through page after pointless page
of meaningless information
and cliched pictures

searching for something that i've probably
accidentally scrolled past already.

© 2012 freelancejouster


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Posted 12 Years Ago


and I'll probably be sitting at a computer screen at the opposite end looking at that something you passed by, LOL, good stuff

Posted 12 Years Ago


:)
I have that feeling everyday. I'm so busy looking, that I miss the overall view.
Forest for the trees stuff.

And, I have the feeling that your adult life will be a beautiful thing, filled with brilliant literature and laughter and, who knows, perhaps even dancing. ;)

Love the piece.
But, remember the wisdom given by old guys like me,
NEVER kill the party before you get there.

t

Posted 12 Years Ago


love the irony in this poem. succinct narrative. great piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this. I feel your pain. I love how this is a light subject made deep. Don't change a thing; nothing is missing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I got the message, don't change it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I don't know, it seems like something is missing from it.

Matthew Hardy

Posted 12 Years Ago


have you heard of Mahjong?

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on February 24, 2012
Last Updated on April 14, 2012
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