here

i wouldn't call it love,

not just yet,

i wouldn't whisper of it at all

for fear of wrecking whatever it is

that this is.

i don't want to lose this,

i'd say that i need it,

but then,

that has the chance of ruining it, too.

can't we just say

that i'm in like

with this feeling.

stay with me.

Reviews

[Tim Lion]

Nicely done. And, it's like that, too. It is! If you want it too much you run the risk of getting your guts torn out, if you tell 'it' how you feel, then it might run off and hide under somebody's trailer. lol!
The balance. is. every. thing.
teetering.
tottering.
slipping.
gripping.
Man, what a pain in the soul! What a buncha madness it is....love....God...I want some. :( LMAO! We're strange little creatures.

Greatness here.