prowling

 

 

 

 

 

creature of the night,

dripping in liquid black and fishnets,

a painted on face

with darkened, hardened eyes.

 

batting lashes,

a clever, crafty compliment or two,

enticing.

 

 

 

lures you closer,

subtle hints,

drawing you in.

 

up close, so young!

a child!  a daughter!

just a baby!

 

with hips that move like that.

 

 

 

 

 

how old are you?

 

a coquette smile,

"old enough."

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Quinn Blackburn]

wow, really paints a picture! Perfect closing, and surely a poetic snippet of life that many can relate to through their own experiences. excellent work!

[Samantha]

i absolutely LOVE this. wow, took my breath away..
"old enough." that was brilliant.
amazing, i'm hooked!