if your insides matched your outsides, no one would be able to look at you

if your insides matched your outsides, no one would be able to look at you

A Poem by freelancejouster

 

 

 

 

your cough was not secretive.

in case you were wondering.

 

 

it brought all attention to you.

just like you had planned.

 

you blush,

like you're so cute,

and innocent,

but that glint's in your eyes.

 

again.

 

 

 

 

© 2011 freelancejouster


Author's Note

freelancejouster
constructive criticism? anyone?

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Very good writing - so simple, and yet so effective at the same time. Masterful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


That was short, yet like a shotgun blast to the chest when it just hits the second verse and the final words
Keep writing my friend!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on January 24, 2011
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