Cotton Paper With Black Ink

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Cotton paper with my thoughts

Black inked pen connecting dots

Fallen speech from my lips

A thousand words guiding my fingertips

 

Author's Note

I don't think I have poetry in me as much as I did before... :/

Reviews

[Last Lying Look]

Wow, this was amazing. I loved it!
It was short yet perfect and to the point.
Excellent work.

-Elissa :)

[justink :):)]

yes u do i realy liked the description of the act of writing

[stipe]

beautiful description of the act of writing

[Tyler James]

sleek and smooth, criminally short but hit the mark once more. Its funny how so little words can express so much.

[J.P.O.et]

Yes you do
Great piece, short and concise while speaking volumes
Very well done :)

J.P.O.et

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is really damn emotional...
Short but yet so vivid and powerful..I mean it's really great..
Very very powerful..!

[DeAn]

I think wizthom got it right boo. you did well. poetry is from the heart and can not be forced or fashioned. it must just flow.

this flowed well in all it's simplicity and spoke volumes to the reader. so have heart. poetry lives on in you.

l8r g8r
-Dean

[wizthom]

but without emotions u are just all dressed up to go nowhere,
sometimes it's better this way to thought doodle for words that give life to sight and mind,,beautiful don't change nor add.it worked,,peace wizthom

[ShadowWolf]

Very clear and well done!

[AmeliaRose]

that was really really pretty! I love it :) it's short, but sweet and i could tell what you were talking about! I don't think you need to change anything nad i think you have good poetry skills.