Pb & J: Poem

Short poem

Sisters,
Two persons who communicate through giggles and tears.
Tell me your hopes and for exchange I’ll show you my fears.
I’ve never saw an adventure so big as the one you hold in your eyes.
I could see right through you so there’s no need to feed me your candy coated lies.
You hold my hand and I’ll hold your secrets.
Sisters, that’s how good it gets.

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

:) Enjoy

Reviews

[justjenn_2u]

I never had a sister but I wish I did. How wonderful to have a best friend for life. Nice depiction of sisters.

[a Messenger]

Nice intro Erin. Look forward to the book.

[J.P.O.et]

Nice, I like the 'candy coated lies' part
both how you arranged the words and it is
a play on 'sugar coated'
Makes me interested in the story
J.P.O.et

[DeAn]

I can see this over a PB&J samich. :)


coolio :)