I'm Breaking Up With You

You
Are
Dropping
Bombs
In
My
Ears
So Why
Are
You Whispering.

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Loved the short lines....the stacatto rhythm was perfect for the emotional impact of the words. Indeed, when someone is delivering a bad message, why bother whispering? It does not make the words less hurtful. Good write. Lydi**

[f. ann]

Thank you so much for the feedback!

[Sami Khalil]

I like this...:)..............