Cavity

I really hate cavities. I was eating Mike and Ike while writing this. Enjoy?

Rot
Rot
Rot!
Beautiful Teeth
Nasty
Nasty
Nasty
Cavities!
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Out of my 32 teeth
You have claimed
A lucky 13
I know the candy
Shouldn't mingle
With the molars
And the soda
Doesn't help
But must you persist?

Reviews

[Bryan]

I found that poem very humorous. At first I thought it might be kind of lame, but after I read it, I realized, this was really well done. The word choice and the movement of the poem works really well! Good job! A good read.

[f. ann]

Thank You! (I was just thinking about how much I do NOT want to go to the dentist this Friday)