Prolouge

Prolouge

A Chapter by Petal

Twinkle, twinkle little star

                The screams going from the normally peaceful house disturb the neighbors but none are brave enough to find out what was going on.

How I wonder what you are?

The neighbors were just trying to get some rest but it looks like they weren’t getting any tonight.

Up above the world so high

One little boy how ever could not take the terrified shrieks, so he left through his window and walk towards the tiny house.

Like a diamond in the sky

Has he looked through the window to see what was happening, he noticed that a little glimmer of light was coming from a closet. Then a man who looked unfamiliar went up to the closet with a bloody knife and the boy’s best friend was killed in front of his eyes.

Twinkle, twinkle little star

How I wonder what you are?



© 2011 Petal


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Creepy! but cool at the same time. I like the idea of putting a song and the begging of the story together.

Posted 12 Years Ago


How you incorporated the song really made it creepy in a good way :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow.. that was intense. And the little break with the song in it... I like how it's short but has everything in it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Petal
Petal

Atlantica, MA



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Hello, I’ve had this account for a long time but haven’t used it for a while. I think since high school. But recently I’ve been wanting to write again and have been working on a boo.. more..

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