~~blind love~~

Blind love is when you love someone that no one could see

Blind love is when you are happy about life yet no one could see how happy you are

Blind love is something that only two people could only feel about each other

Blind love is something that some people can’t not see with their own eyes

Yet could see how each other happy

Some people don’t see how one person could be so happy and others don’t understand why there is a thing called blind love

That’s why I’m glad that i have blind love

No one to judge for who they are

These people are blind to love

Only love who they think are good for them

When it means having to be with someone who beats then yet thet go back to them because they like the pain of what their other half do to them

Some people have no hearts

Only pain that others give them

And I’m not one of those people that have their other half have to beat me to feel love

Because my love is blind no one could see my love yet I know I’m happy to call them my love

Reviews

[Melissa]

thanks ace Some people don't think that there is a thing called blind love but if your not looking for love there is always that one person that you will fall in love with.

[Lena Rossmore]

This is so sweet. It really made me smile :)

[Melissa]

thanks, that's how i always write that's i normally don't share my poetry.

[Pencrafter]

This poem uses some interesting expressions. Just a couple of suggestions: In the third line you define blind love as something "that only two people" have, yet in the last line you say "I'm happy to call them", indicating several. In the fourth line you might change "people can't not see" into "people can't fail to see". About the theme of your poem, I'm not usually an advocate of blind love. It smacks of gullibility or incredulity. I've known many people who blindly fell in love and so didn't see the awful pit in which they found themselves. But, hey, you can write what you want in your poem. I do like the mention of abuse that some people willingly subject themselves to. We wish that they could get out of such an abusive relationship. Overall, you write with feeling and heart. :-)