Number One

Number One

A by Whiles

What a fresh-faced picture I must have made, leaning against her, face upturned like a goddamn flower.

“Say it again” I sang, rapturous as an ingénue in an opera.

“Girlfriend. You’re my girlfriend.” she obliged, smiling indulgently at me.

“Again!”

“You’re my beautiful girlfriend” she said, sliding one, two, three fingers in me.

I ignored the searing pain of having a calloused hand split me open and concentrated on the deliciousness of belonging.

© 2008 Whiles


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again, you have that knack that few people have.. it seems a bit natural for you.. it's so amzing but this story-poem jumped out right at me well done my friend Cheers:)

Posted 15 Years Ago


I don't know what makes some poems reach out and grab me, but this one did. It's a little bit mean with sharp teeth, but not too offensive.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on September 26, 2008

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Northampton, MA



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A Story by Whiles