Bumblebee

A friend of mine has been many things to me, one of them is a bumble bee....

Bumble bee- you fly

Because you also failed your

College physics class

Author's Note

Please feel free to critique, discuss, and reveiw any of my works. Thank you for your time.

Reviews

[W.k.kortas]

Most haikus have the dual shortcomings of being vapid and deadly serious. This is a pleasant change, as it is both crisp and wryly humorous.

[Mark Pearce]

A nice take James -- Turning around those old suppositions to reveal something new.

I think that's one of poetry's greatest potentials...to make us "see" what we see eveyday.

This stands on it own beyond the 5-7-5 structure.

[Poeticpiers]

yes bumble bees are insufficiently aerodynamic to fly but as bees cant read they fly anyway