Heart and Mind

the heart shouts

my love for him

but my mind sigh.

"what a foolish heart!"

The heart says

"what a thick brain you are!

You know nothing about these things!"

But my mind says

"when will this foolish heart 

learn the lessons of love?"

my heart dances with joy

whenever his eyes met mine

But my mind take away

all the rhythm that made my heart dance...

Reviews

[¿]

Difficult fraction of life is when mind and heart declares a battle....and the one who gets hurt is soul!
Great read....thanks for sharing this cute gal! 😊

[Fate]

Thanks for the review! I really appreciate this. :)

[¿]

You're heartedly welcome!😊

[Fate]

Hoping to read your works as well :)

[Johnny Westbrook]

Sounds like a battle between the mind and the heart. This was an enjoyable read. Keep writing :) I wouldn't mind reading more of your work.

[Fate]

thanks for reading my poem(:

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Nicely done, well written piece. Great lines.

[Fate]

thanks for reviewing my poem..

[Priscilla Sayers]

I relate to this one and can feel what you are trying to express. Nice job.