Word Vomit .1

First of the word vomit experiments (how not to suck at writing)

She told me the colors where wrong when I tried painting her a picture. I tried changing the colors, but they turned to this brilliant (brilliant in the horrific sense) of grey. Now abandoning the painting, I move on. Maybe now something without colors. Perhaps, just maybe a poem would do.

I tried writing her a poem, but she said the words don't fit her. I attempted to write her song, but again the lyrics didn't fit her. I thought that it was just a bad time, it was just the worst time, but then, when i started to think, I realized that its never the right time. Its just the wrong person.

Author's Note

In word vomit, I would like for you to comment on the style of writing.