Discovery

 Discovery

With every new found aspect,

Do I find myself within

With every tiny detail

Is discovery made

This life, it’s a road

And someday I’ll find myself

I’ll find myself along the path,

Because that is the journey

With this discovery

Do I open my eyes, and see,

See the world around me,

And how it is shaped for us

Because this was its design

Its creation for this

Made for discovery,

And I’ll shout this from the mountains…

…. Because I am discovered

Author's Note

tell me any flaws i want to get better, I want both positive and negative things,
Constructive Criticism!

Reviews

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. hey ... wow ... beautifully written ... an amazing spirit behind this write ... and even i think it's a great idea to shout from the mountains ... is very surreal ... :) ... p.s. ... for the constructive part ... i think it's a good idea to recite a poem ... and then alter some words ... if needed ... depending on how it sounds to you ... for you are the owner of what you write ...