My sight in you

Darling, You make me dream in clouds of white.
of pure and innocent and strong and right.
Sweety, You make me think in terms of blue.
so kind, wise and always true.
Baby, You make me pray in gold.
with Your love no request is to bold.
Cutey, You make me sing in red.
so intensely vibrant i loose my head.
Sexy, You make me feel in pink.
im your couch and your my shrink.
Gorgeous, You make me fear in black.
with Your love theres no situation i cant hact.
Angel, You make me talk in yellow.
with flowing words that prove im shallow.
Love, You do these colors to me.
So let me tell you what I see.

I see the sky painted red, with our hearts golden clad, with yellow thoughts running through our heads, and blue sensations insanely rad.
I see white beds, bowing to us theyre blackened heads, I see colors in a flowing stream, Completing our hallowed screams.
I see tiny feet, running onward toward, a pretty house, made of more than just boards.
I know You do these things to me, but i want to do these things for Thee.
You should always feel the most beautiful in existance,
with Your beautiful eyes and witty resistance,
You should always feel the princess of lore,
for which the prince is always sure,
You should be Your friends highest envy,
for Your silly smile will always win me.
You should be valued more precious then gold,
for You any man's flesh would go cold.
You should always be kept alight,
for Your beautiful fire lights the night.
You should be loved for all time,
all of these i task of my mind.
Sogni Dolci il mi amore.
i will love You now and forever more.

Author's Note

For Corey Ida Folse. May our love grow stronger then the redwoods and stay longer then the sea.

Reviews

[Phoenix]

This is a magnificent poem, really sincere. I think everyone needs someone to feel this way about them, and to feel this way for. I hope she realizes what she has.