Desperation in nineth

A different girls betrayal. Apparently, I don't change much through the years.

My hands are shaking

i don't know why

my heart is breaking

for you i cry

My life means nothing

my death means all

why can't you see

for you i fall

please don't abandon me

please dont go

I'll change for you

just dont let me go

for you I'll be shallow

I'll make my sould a desert

but without you I'll be hollow

so please dont make me hurt

I'll be whatever you want

I'll change what i neeed

just dont let me go

Please

please

please

Reviews

[Rylan Batten]

this is a really strong, meaningful poem. You pull of the rhyming and tempo of it pretty well, and I liked the impact of the ending. keep it up

[Phoenix]

You are so depressing! Never ever ever never change for ANYONE but yourself. That's so not right, no one's allowed to tell, or even ask, you to change. That's your choice.
But, once again, very good poem, very well written, and lots of feeling that speaks really loud. You really are good at being miserable!