Response

Not my writing, as people who have read my other pieces will probably notice immediately. This is the response of a girl once known to me to my poem "prompt", which was originally a midnight text message.

Secluded to a heart

longing to be shared

what keeps me so isolated?

it's not as if i'm scared

 

What keeps me so seperated

so unable to see

even through open windows

a clear view cannot be

 

I can feel your heart

its warmth exceeding mine

gives my love desires

to its hidden shine

 

such optimism in society

as if love endures all

but in their world it's sure

that love will come to fall

 

But give thanks to our rebellion

and that we fell so hard

I will love you hoping

my heart will drop its guard

 

It's hard to stay within the world

what is to me not being much

within its own my heart dwells

reality is only sure within your touch.

 

 

Author's Note

It's difficult to post this.....this girl left me for reasons unknown, not to long ago. I hope everyone can learn from these. Also, same girl from "I hope your happy".

Reviews

[Phoenix]

I'm sorry this happened...it sounded like she was really unsure of herself. I think it was something she had to work out, it wasnt your fault.