My first in high school

My first in high school

A Poem by Alexander Fox
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Long distance relationships, whatcha gonna do?

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I need again the distraction of school, cus without it I really feel like a fool,

so in love but so lonely my mind questions time, but then I remember that shes really mine,

My songs are the worst so just leave them be, Just one more heartbreak on our life nativity,

Hello again me whats your current state?, Im dieing because of someone I love to hate,

I hear hell is nice this time of the year, but im tired of my lies so drown me in fear,

If I'm not scaring you yet pay more of your time, Ill break open your soul & not give you a dime,

Im starting to think the biggest lies are true, You know the ones.....there about me and you.

© 2008 Alexander Fox


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Oh, this one was one of my favorites! I think this was my second favorite...when I find the first I'll let you know. I don't really know what to say about it....it's like one of those things you can read over and over and never get tired of it, and you seem to find out something new each time. The ending hits you each time too, even though you already know it's coming.

Posted 16 Years Ago


WOW!! the ending of this poem made me say that!! Relationships are hard no matter where you live or how old you are. I am curious; "are the lies because you have never met"????? or because you both are living in a fantasy world of long distance love????

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Alexander Fox
Alexander Fox

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