USA, USA, ___ shed his grace on thee

give me my cake,
give me my bed,
let me eat it there and abandon my head.
why go crazy?  theres hollister here!
along with enough chocolate to keep us busy for years.
what about sex?
well, theres an abundance of that, from all of our teenage s***s to our scandoulous queers.
we have more freedom then ever,
to stay in doors that is,
and it's amazing if you have more than two kids.
"why am i writing then, if everythings so swell? It's not like were migrating directly to hell!"
oops, I brought christianity into our government controlled lives,
which I now know is wrong, because men can be wives.
the Black people complain because they keep killing eachother,
and all White folks do is steal from their brothers.
the Latino's are best, for they outnumber all now,
and the Middle Easterners still think we should worship them cows.
the Asians make money by selling t.v.'s,
and the Native Americans break whatever laws they plaese.
and on we proclaim,
screaming "Freedom for All",
while making new laws that limit our calls.
our freedom is Slavery,
if you havn't looked lately,
beware of your rights,
they tend to cause fights,
keep saying I'm wrong,
but life is to long.

Author's Note

Older poem, about 4 months.

Reviews

[Phoenix]

Well this poem could easily be taken very badly. I'm afraid to say this is one of my least favorites, though I do appreciate the honesty, as always. Some of it's pretty offensive...even if it doesn't apply to me. It kind of sounds like you're just trying to get someone fired up. Well it worked.