Affection

Day in, Day out
My heart gets torn apart
but stops just before I lose everything

So that it can be mended and broken
Again and again

Turns into months, then years
How long will it take for me you to give me
the little affection I need

I'm not asking for much
maybe a smile, maybe a hug

What ever it is, big or small
My life will be made

Trust me
Even a little's enough

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

I liked your Third Phrase of this write. Again you flattered me by your poetric words. Your talent's shining from far away from me... In this Arena your writes're also good and you too seem a great writer.
Keep writing, i just need such kinda great writers alike you to read enough stuffs.

[The Violent Wolf]

at first i could relate to it, like at the beginning, but then it changed..and..i like it. its a lot like my life i think haha