Cassidy

Wobbly knees

learning to walk

touched all that she sees

dances only to rock

curly hair 

existing without a care

big brown eyes

love you so incredibly much 

I can hardly bare

displaying so much feelings of joy

so very excited when you get a new toy

dressed you only in dresses

cleaned all of your messes

love to hold you

gave you soft caresses

I want to tell you how much  i love you

I love you immensely 

and all that you do

Reviews

[Jack Collins]

I had an immense feeling of playful jealousy toward the child due to envying the life they must be growing up with as such as talented & creative mother as yourself audrie! Dont ever let go of that! Excellent verse

[audrie]

Thank you for that lovely review!

[Saddam]

I want to tell you how much i love you
I love you immensely
and all that you do.

Love this too. Lovely.

[audrie]

Thank you! = ]

[Michael G. Smith]

What a wonderful ode to your daughter I am assuming. Parenthood is one of the greatest gifts from god along with marriage and following grandparenthood. I have been blessed to relive raising my son through rearing my grandson Karson who is so much like his Uncle Jake (he's my daughter Jessica's son). I want to share a poem I wrote when my daughter and I were estranged called Chalk Rainbows.

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/seasonofverse/1137622/

[Cory Barrett]

I understand this love all too well.

[audrie]

Heya - just realized that you left this review. Nobody can understand the love you feel for a child unless you have one. Thanks for the review!

[Matching Socks]

Awwwww. A mother's love. Ain't nothin' that comes close.
Except maybe a father's. :)

But it's a different bond.
Really like this.

[audrie]

Ha Ha! Thanks for taking the time to read this

[Avinash]

You did not share the pics of your lovely angel but we quite get it through your poem :)

[audrie]

Oh, thanks. I didn't even think of it

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Wow, this poem is so sweet, she must be a very lucky girl! :-) brilliantly executed.

Kaze~

[audrie]

Thanks Kaze- she's a teenager now- oh, what fun - ha ha

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Haha, your very welcome. :-) :-D

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this poem tells us how much you love her, and i am sure she knows, she has to be able to feel it.

[audrie]

Thanks Jacob - I can't even put into words how much I love my children - thanks for the review