curious souls

Curious Souls 


Souls bond together 
if only to create of inner ecstasy 
if only to glimpse at a reflection of themselves in a parallel world 

they are floating in an unfamiliar whimsical universe 
with dreamlike happenings and simultaneous awakenings 

this moment encompasses all other moments 
and we will never quite sure what those fleeting moments were 

they are left gliding side by side with a yearning desire 
of finding hope, trust and faith in one another - in anything 

will they ever know what they could be 
if it could as precious as an untainted soul 
if it could be mind blowing 
like the feeling of an orgasm 

All they want to do is build castles in the sky with pink fluffy clouds 
with feathers and snowflakes fall delicately rest upon their souls 
this was their vision of reality 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the complete poem.
"they are left gliding side by side with a yearning desire
of finding hope, trust and faith in one another - in anything "
The good description made the reader think and ponder. I liked the above lines. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Such a brilliant write, I loved reading it.

Kaze~ :-)

[audrie]

Thanks Kaze - I'm so glad that you enjoyed this! thanks for the review,

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[A. Amos]

Love the title and your odes were mesmerizing, great job!

[audrie]

Heya - thanks for the review! Question - I'm not very familiar with terminology - can you tell me what an ode is?

[A. Amos]

Ode means verse and you are most welcome

[Sami Khalil]

This is good...Thank you for sharing...:)

[audrie]

I know that you wrote this over a year ago but I was off of writerscafe for a long time. So, thank you so much for the review

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)........................

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Beautiful.. Pen On..

Regards,
Lucky

[audrie]

I will do just that!

[B-poet]

Vivid imagery backed by a colorful poetic prose. Great write. An enjoyable read. :)

[audrie]

Thanks for the review - I always enjoy hearing what you have to say