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About a man name Alizai.

Alizai had been walking the forest path for what seemed liked hours. The trees reaching high overhead casting shadows along the way with rays of sun appearing to light the path. He could hear the birds in the distance and he rush of the nearby river. As he came to a fork in the road he decided to spend some time at the river. When he stepped off the path he had an overwhelming feeling of being watched. Alizai could not place where he had last felt this, but knew that he had once before. Walking out of the tree line he could see the riverbank and the nearby falls. He remembered the water being a light blue and being able to see clearly to the bottom but as he got closer to the water, he noticed a faint red tint to the water. At first he was confused by it and wondered what could be causing it. Looking upstream he started to see the water becoming gradually darker. As the realization of what was happening dawned on Alizai, he started to walk along the river hoping he would not see what he thought was causing the river to run red.

Author's Note

This work is unfinished for the time being. This is what Matt has sent to me. Please be patient with follow up work.

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[Ashadan]

i will look forward for the follow-up =)