Holding Hands

sated by the rush
desire
on fingertips glide
a smile
music pulses through
hazy thoughts
a simple touch
hold my hand
i fall
spiraling into wonder

Author's Note

Not sure how i feel about this one, i just wanted short and sweet. An innocent thought. Let me know!

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Beautiful poem, Alana...your poem evoked so much emotions in such a few lines. Holding hands with someone you care about has that effect. Awesome.

[Gomer LePoet]

Simple but sweet!

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this is so sweet, love the airy feeling of this write. Nicely written!