Holding Hands

Holding Hands

A Poem by Alana Michele

sated by the rush
desire
on fingertips glide
a smile
music pulses through
hazy thoughts
a simple touch
hold my hand
i fall
spiraling into wonder

© 2011 Alana Michele


Author's Note

Alana Michele
Not sure how i feel about this one, i just wanted short and sweet. An innocent thought. Let me know!

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Beautiful poem, Alana...your poem evoked so much emotions in such a few lines. Holding hands with someone you care about has that effect. Awesome.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Simple but sweet!

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is so sweet, love the airy feeling of this write. Nicely written!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on April 16, 2011
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Alana Michele
Alana Michele

Harrisburg, PA



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