Sing

Lust entwines

as the music plays

Fire leaks out

a soft hope

feeling the tempo

desire trails on twilight's approach

the touch of stars embracing

light pierces the dark

a golden glow

hear the rhythm

growing

thunder sounds

the distance call

closer it moves

a swelling in your heart

one tear escapes

and then the music fades

 

Reviews

[Gomer LePoet]

Nice, but don't stop dancing even when the music fades!

[E.J. Wallace]

Beautiful poem. My favorite line is "desire trails on twilight's approach." The alliteration in that line with the words "trails" and "twilight's" allows for a smooth, melodic reading. The imagery through out is wonderful. Great job!

[Axolotl1]

Beautiful. great flow to this..

[Lily Mae]

I love lust and music and thunder:)x I think this is a beautifully written piece.. xx

[Forest Green]

Moments distilled to their true effect; cataloged in an inspiring fashion. You have precision and movement in every phrase.

Good poem...

[fargone]

i really enjoyed this, alana. the link between music and senseuality has always been strong for me. excellent/

[Dream Weaver]

It's amazing how something so brief as in your "words"
can mean so much. Splendid imagery and flow. loved it!

[Robin]

words that flow perfectly through my mind , image after image , note by note .

[emmajoy]

A song so clear it screams delight .. flowing words from start to finish. Hope that sad tear signifies more than you've written, maybe a special tear sealing the moment.