The Creek

this is about a place where i grew up, it was where i went to get away from everything.

crystal water

caresses a muddy shore

sunlight slips through

the emerald screen

breath in quiet

exhale peace

birds chatter in the haven above

the creek gurgles below

sun soaked minds grow heavy

the outside world fades

the struggle gone

a smile dances on your lips

sleep consumes

Reviews

[AK]

I really liked this poem! It is absolutely wonderful!

[J Todd Underhill]

I love this write! I picked it because of the title, but once reading it this spoke to me more than I thought it would!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful description of a good place to be. I like the private and peaceful spots. Allow us to think and gather our minds. Photo was perfect for the poem. Allow the reader to go to a good place in vision. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Antonio Valentino]

Aww the sun slipping through the emerald screen this was gorgeous. I used to live behind a pear orchard, those trees were my getaway. This related to me like I wrote it myself.

Fantastic job Alana.
Antonio

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This poem has a serenity about it, perhaps through the power of suggestion. Thanks for bringing me there with your soothing words. 100/100

[Robin]

special writing of a special place .

[Bennett Logan]

This is an awesome poem! I came away from it with a real sense of peace and solitude. You give your reader just enough information to convey your point. You involve all the senses—I could hear the birds and the water, I could feel the warm air and the cool ground, and I could see the muddy bank and the green canape of trees. And then the memory of someone's smile brought it all home with a very personal touch. I'll be sure to read more!

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

So beautiful!